Kylah: Disappearing world

Friday 17 April 2020

Disappearing world

Piece by piece the world was despairing, I stood there worried looking at our town fall apart, suddenly I heard a crack. I looked down and saw cracks below my feet. I panicked and ran away as quickly as I could. I could feel the burning sun getting closer and closer to us as the town was falling apart. I could feel bits and pieces of the building dropping down on me like it was going to collapse.

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Anonymous17 April 2020 at 21:24
Hi Kylah it is Salamasina, nice work I love all the amazing words and sentences you have. I am working on this one too but it is my second on my first one was called Flying high. I hope you keep making amazing story's like this one!
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Anonymous21 April 2020 at 11:25
Hi Kylah It's me Ana Nice work I love all the amazing words you have used in your writing. I have been working on my story called mountain pass. Hope I see more of your cool and amazing story's like this one. blog you later
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About Me

Hello, my name is Kylah and I go to Owairaka District Primary School. I am in Year 6 and learn in Room 8. I am part Samoan and Maori. My hobbies are art, dance and running. My interests are athletics and sports. I have 6 siblings and live with four sister's whose names are Acelynn, Azaria, Savina, Nevaeh. I am good at writing independently because I know the method of spelling things out and I am good at my maths like problem-solving and knowing my basic facts. I also enjoy reading and I am very, very good at catching the ball and running. My challenges for this year is getting better at writing by staying focused and writing for longer. I enjoy doing fitness every day in the morning and doing Core 5 or other online learning activities after. I am looking forwards to athletics and cross country. My personal achievements are getting better at running and doing more writing at home to get better. The person that inspires me is my mum because she always tells me even though you can’t do something yet you could still try and maybe one day you could achieve it. The other person that also inspires me is my friends because they always help me do something that I can't do like singing. I'm really bad at and they said just practice and sing often and soon it will get better.