Kylah: Mountain pass

Monday 20 April 2020

Mountain pass

Slip my feet went as I moved on the slippery stairs covered in freezing cold snow. As I carried on walking up the stairs a great big whoosh came out of nowhere I felt like an ice cube after that big whoosh. I finally got to a hollow bit covered in rocks they were so close together I felt like they would fall on me.

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Phil @ Ako Hiko20 April 2020 at 14:27
Kia ora Kylah, I like that in a short paragraph you've managed to include a simile, adverbs and onomatopoeia! I'd love to know what happens next...
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About Me

Hello, my name is Kylah and I go to Owairaka District Primary School. I am in Year 6 and learn in Room 8. I am part Samoan and Maori. My hobbies are art, dance and running. My interests are athletics and sports. I have 6 siblings and live with four sister's whose names are Acelynn, Azaria, Savina, Nevaeh. I am good at writing independently because I know the method of spelling things out and I am good at my maths like problem-solving and knowing my basic facts. I also enjoy reading and I am very, very good at catching the ball and running. My challenges for this year is getting better at writing by staying focused and writing for longer. I enjoy doing fitness every day in the morning and doing Core 5 or other online learning activities after. I am looking forwards to athletics and cross country. My personal achievements are getting better at running and doing more writing at home to get better. The person that inspires me is my mum because she always tells me even though you can’t do something yet you could still try and maybe one day you could achieve it. The other person that also inspires me is my friends because they always help me do something that I can't do like singing. I'm really bad at and they said just practice and sing often and soon it will get better.