My name is Zana and I am a blog commenter from the Summer Learning Journey, it is awesome to see your first post of the summer and I look forward to seeing more as you continue blogging!
I really enjoyed this activity as I was able to read all the creative and unique comic ideas everyone wrote. I found your comic quite interesting because rather than writing their speech in the bubbles you wrote their thoughts and actions. Your writing fit well with the story and the emotions you wrote were quite accurate to the emotions portrayed in the images. I would like to know what you would write if you were to write their speech and what they are saying instead of their thoughts/feelings.
Keep up the great work and I hope to see more of your posts over the summer.
Kia Ora Kylah,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Zana and I am a blog commenter from the Summer Learning Journey, it is awesome to see your first post of the summer and I look forward to seeing more as you continue blogging!
I really enjoyed this activity as I was able to read all the creative and unique comic ideas everyone wrote. I found your comic quite interesting because rather than writing their speech in the bubbles you wrote their thoughts and actions. Your writing fit well with the story and the emotions you wrote were quite accurate to the emotions portrayed in the images. I would like to know what you would write if you were to write their speech and what they are saying instead of their thoughts/feelings.
Keep up the great work and I hope to see more of your posts over the summer.
Ngā mihi nui,
Zana Yates